Proposal Feedback

• Great presentation
• Good Idea
• Strong conventional features
• Clear target audience
• Strong Actors
• Will we be able to sustain the visual look of the action-thriller genre?
• Second half of narrative is not working.
• Keep 'Matt' on the first floor until the guy enters the house.
• Then cross-cuts between guy walking up stairs and 'Matt' running upstairs and trying to hide.
• This avoids issue of having 'Matt' looking scared in the upstairs of his own house!
• Develop chronological sequence. 

We were given the green light to move onto pre-production.
We received an A grade for our Planning.
We received an A grade for our Presentation.